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Phase 1 Final Review Photos
Thursday, November 6, 2008

Here are some of my final submissions in the Phase 1 Final Review Process. =) Comments & feedback are welcome.

Stopping Motion


Interesting Outdoor Portrait with a Reflector


Warm on Warm Colors


Product Shot with Minimum Depth of Field


You can check out more of my pictures on my flickr page:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/chayanne_marfisi/

posted by Chayanne @ 5:23 PM,

2 Comments:

At November 6, 2008 10:38 PM, Blogger Peter Odegaard Photography said...

they look very nice, like the idea of the product with minimal depth of field, defiantly re-visit this idea in phase 3 and 4.

as for the stopping motion, just a heads up, they were kind of hard on if the object that was supposed to be stopped, had any motion blur at all to it.

but otherwise looking good.

 
At November 7, 2008 12:44 AM, Blogger Wayne Wallace said...

Yea, that purse should be dead sharp, any blur shows movement

Nice idea though. I did a swinging lamp, that was hard too esp on film!

I like your light in the outdoor portrait with reflector but the composition and pose are lacking a little.

Watch your space on the edges on warm on warm either cut those limbs off or leave some room, you got plenty of pixels to work with. Also watch the stuff coming out of the head. Maybe having her watering a flower, looking down with more ground would make this better.

Was it minimum or just shallow DOF? This seems to shallow for me and the composition is to balanced, more focus should be on the product and the out of focus part should be background only. Also if you were going to put type on this your background subject would be covered with type.

Thanks for posting, keep pushing and posting.

 

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