Some New Shots
Wednesday, June 25, 2008
This are shots that were for my commercial shoot that I was suppose to be having made today,
but the lady never showed nor did she call to tell me that she wasn't able to make it.
So I turned these lemons to lemonade. Tell me what you think.
posted by Romo Photography @ 2:20 PM,
2 Comments:
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At June 26, 2008 9:40 AM,
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This is not a comment about the photograph itself - it's about your logo in the lower right corner. My suggestion would be to consider placing it according to the photograph. The first two pictures make it look like she has a tattoo R on her neck and then on her arm. And second glance you can see that is not the case but I think it might be more appropriate to move it to the lower left of the frame in instances where it competes with your image.
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At June 27, 2008 8:09 AM,
Mark Denman said...
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Hi Romo,
Don't you hate when clients flake out?
I wanted to chime in with my .02
I would say that the young lady in 1,2, and 4 is not giving you much in the way of expression. That's what jump out at me first. In #2 the hand by chin/neck is a bit of a cliche-ish pose and doesn't add much to the image. Also with her head being turned camera right and her eyes pulled back to camera left you've created wicked eye pull.
I wanted to say it was casting, but I'm not sure how much control you had over who was being photographed. She has an interesting face but there is something more that needs to be drawn out of her to make her images work.
Respectfully, this is just my .02. Keep getting those gigs, dude!!!
